


a few weeks ago I watched a movie, the best movie I had ever watched in my entire life
it was called AVATAR and ever one was blue it was about a Young marine called jack sully who had lost his legs far far away and he got sent to a army Base in Pandora a planet lost some where in space even farther away from earth (which, like in WALL-E was no longer at all green unlike Pandora witch seems to be completely jungle
and when jack gets to Pandora he finds that the natives called the NA' VI of the planet are apparently
hostile
when jack gets there the head of the Base tell him
that he has to try to get the Na'vi to move from the home they have established there
because the town they live in is directly above a mineral that could hold the answer to
earth problem
how is going to do this? well the scientist of the Pandora Base have created a device that lets you link your body to a
artificially made Na 'vi
that has some of jack's DNA
and so jack gets into the device and he is immediately connected to the other Na 'vi Jack
is taken by, I think they call it a Scorpion witch pretty much is a helicopter and is dropped of witch is where they think a Na 'vi camp is soon enough Jack gets lost at night, and a pack of what look like half coyote half lizard, and th
en heroic enough for any film swinging in is NEYTIRI
it is a place where these dragons sleep they call them BANCHEES because there screams sound like dieing girls
and the challenge is to try and fly the Banshee with out getting killed "how do I know witch one I should try and fly?"
"the one that Try's to kill you!"
so jack starts to walk among the Banchees and when one wakes up and try to bite jacks hand of he grabs its neck and wings him self up onto the animal and it immediately obeys him and he flys it around and he become a part of the tribe
but then he realised the time had ran out before the miners for the minerals where comeing and they where prying the Na 'vi out of the village then jack made a decision, he wanted to entirly become a Na 'vi so he got the Shaman of the tribe to transfer his soul from his human body to his Na 'vi body




when jack gets there the head of the Base tell him
that he has to try to get the Na'vi to move from the home they have established there
because the town they live in is directly above a mineral that could hold the answer to
earth problem
how is going to do this? well the scientist of the Pandora Base have created a device that lets you link your body to a

that has some of jack's DNA
and so jack gets into the device and he is immediately connected to the other Na 'vi Jack
is taken by, I think they call it a Scorpion witch pretty much is a helicopter and is dropped of witch is where they think a Na 'vi camp is soon enough Jack gets lost at night, and a pack of what look like half coyote half lizard, and th

and saves him but makes fun of him for his childishness for making fire and so much noise

then shows him the highest class of elegance running through the woods not making one noise
and jack tagging behind in amazement in this glowing jungle and the reacting moss
she takes him to the place that jack remembers to be the place that he has to try to get them to move out from, its then that he realises that it would be impossible
Neytiri shows Jack to the head of the tribe and asks him if she should kill him of not and he say we should teach him our ways first, and it shall be you who teaches him
so months later he goes to the place where he shall prove him self

then shows him the highest class of elegance running through the woods not making one noise
and jack tagging behind in amazement in this glowing jungle and the reacting moss
she takes him to the place that jack remembers to be the place that he has to try to get them to move out from, its then that he realises that it would be impossible
Neytiri shows Jack to the head of the tribe and asks him if she should kill him of not and he say we should teach him our ways first, and it shall be you who teaches him
so months later he goes to the place where he shall prove him self

and the challenge is to try and fly the Banshee with out getting killed "how do I know witch one I should try and fly?"
"the one that Try's to kill you!"
so jack starts to walk among the Banchees and when one wakes up and try to bite jacks hand of he grabs its neck and wings him self up onto the animal and it immediately obeys him and he flys it around and he become a part of the tribe
but then he realised the time had ran out before the miners for the minerals where comeing and they where prying the Na 'vi out of the village then jack made a decision, he wanted to entirly become a Na 'vi so he got the Shaman of the tribe to transfer his soul from his human body to his Na 'vi body
Wow, max, quite confusing though........... coolio
ReplyDeleteI wrote you a whole long comment and it got lost!
ReplyDeleteI was saying I love the poetry in what you wrote, even the way it is formatted is like a song or poem. I was imagining if you filmed images and put the words on them like a video Avatar blog film poem thing (you'd probably have to cut out a bit though!)?
Here's my favorite part (poem-wise!): it partly reminds me of Where the Wild Things Are!
and then heroic enough for any film swinging in is NEYTIRI
and saves him but makes fun of him for his childishness for making fire and so much noise
then shows him the highest class of elegance running through the woods not making one noise
and jack tagging behind in amazement in this glowing jungle and the reacting moss
she takes him to the place that jack remembers to be the place that he has to try to get them to move out from, its then that he realises that it would be impossible
I agree with what your mom says about the poetry of your writing. When my mom (whose name is Sandy) read the Exurbia post she immediately called me on the phone to tell me how much she enjoyed reading it and how impressed she was by how your use of the heart and arteries as metaphor. Have you thought of writing a poem about Avatar?
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